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Turning A New Leaf

Poem By: Natane Alagua
Poetry


This Short Poem is about a girl who is confused about life and is just looking to start over but needing the reassurance that there is hope though View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 8, 2007    Reads: 40    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Lost and confused in this big big world

Helpless and lonely little girl

Looking for someone to take her in

Looking for someone to be her friend

No place to run, no place to hide

No one will trust her, so many she lied

Just wanting to start over fresh and brand new

Just looking for someone to tell her story to

Looking for something but nothing at all

Looking for people with big hearts not small

Tired of chaos, madness and sorrow

Tired of hoping for a better day tommorrow

Ready to give up give in and  quit

Ready for her life to stop being bull shit

She know there is hope she just has to find

it deep in herself and stop being so blind


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Comments:

Very nice. This poem is the "poster child" of modern day youth. So many teens need a friend, someone they can confide in, but alas, they are not to be found. I blame this on the eroding morality of our nation and the fundamental undermining of the typical family structure. The drive to provide and succeed in this materialistic world has overshadowed what is truly important...the future generations. Great job and keep up the good work!

Posted: Sep 9, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks, I really appreciate your comment. Please feel free to give me constuctive critisism on any of my work



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