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A Prayer

Poem By: Nessly305
Poetry


the way i pray........ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 5, 2007    Reads: 95    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


ive been barely breathing cus im almost dead.

thx for listening to the words ive siad.

after this you have read.

its my mind and mine alone.

but now im just a stone.

i dissapear and come back again.

just to explain how to begin.

not illusion but a spell.

now a demon crawls through hell.

into your head.

through someone dead.

your now cursed forever.

its like you and your life were never.

my words are a infection.

to missing peices of your minds detection.

now lay me down to sleep.

pray the lord my souls neck deep.

if i die before you take.

pray the lord my soul he wont break.

 


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Comments:

Wow dude, this is amazing work.
Ive tried the poetry thing before, and ive never been very good.
But this is an inspiration to me actually.
Thx for writing.
Cant wait for more

Posted: Apr 5, 2007

Author Comment:

your welcome thx

I liked the last four lines -- similar to my 'Forgotten Prayer.

Posted: Apr 7, 2007

Author Comment:

thx



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