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Bring it Back

Poem By: Nessly305
Poetry


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Submitted: Jan 9, 2007    Reads: 135    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Why all the hate inside.

Feelings ive already died.

Creeping through my spine.

I refuse to stand in this painful line.

Maggots squirming around for there needs.

Until they stop and decay in the weeds.

Hate is the center of all i feel.

My reality is just another way to deal.

Mounding up like dirt in my eyes.

All of us together is the only wise.

Reunite and bring these peices back.

Before we forget and it all turns black.


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"mounding up like dirt in my eyes"---I like that! Some spelling errors & grammatical, though that may have been intentional but, other than that... good, very interesting.

Posted: Jan 9, 2007

Author Comment:

it is intentional............makes it more of my own///but thx

cool poem good job:)

Posted: Jan 13, 2007

Author Comment:

thx

Very dark indeed. Conjures up some images I'd rather not see! Well written.

Posted: Jan 14, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks



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