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Perfect One

Poem By: Nessly305
Poetry


some sort of love..... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 25, 2007    Reads: 94    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Followed you home, looked in your window.

Smoked one to the dome, just a minute ago.

Seeing you in a new, crazy light.

Realizing what i blew, that dark foggy night.

Your perfect, in everyway.

Your effects, make me stay.

Feel me up again, into the godless skys.

Matters to tend, before our goodbyes.

Out of my sight, im now displaced.

In shame and despite, cornered with this taste.

Just like i had visioned, in my head.

I know you listened, to the words ive siad.

Creeping down you, glancing an ectasy feeled smile.

Love everything inside you, from your hear to your bile.

Racing to somthing, thats there for me.

Somthing for nothing, is the way it will be.

 


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Awesome!

Posted: Mar 25, 2007

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thx


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wow! really felt the rejection in the middle of it! well done!

Posted: Mar 28, 2007

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thx



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