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Poem By: Nessly305
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just my thoughts in poetry View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 3, 2008    Reads: 182    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


For got everything that used to be.

Sadness feels in the gap.

Life is so hard to be.

Perfection sats on my lap.

Taunting with her ways.

Thinking of a knife in her thought.

Havent slept in many days.

Inbetween life and death im caught.

So many choices in this weird existence.

I dont even attempt.

All i will show is resistence,

Until it all relents.


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hi! ness. seems like a lot of conflict is going on in ur mind and u r not finding a way out. conundrum. flow with the current. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

there are'nt enough questions to answer the bizzare craziness surounding us. too strange... gotta stand against the flow, whatever the cost. if your always different than those aroung you...one of you has to be right...maybe not. fuck it

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

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thanks read some of my others youd like them



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