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The Back of my Head

Poem By: Nessly305
Poetry


Tags: love, poetry, life

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Submitted: Apr 19, 2007    Reads: 47    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Left the empty promises behind.

Found a fairytale of a different kind.

Not gods hopeful eyes.

Turns out hes the one i depise.

Left to die forever.

With knives of all shapes to sever.

Where are we going?

Why are we growing?

Just to say goodbye.

Have it all washed away when we die?

I need awnsers now god.

Beginning to think your a fraud.

Where are you at and where have you been.

Up in heaven creating our sin?

Im sick of waiting for you.

If your real you already knew.

So why do you keep me waiting?

While im surely fading.

I voice your name and get silence.

So ill get your attention with violence.

Deprived and dieing.

The back of my head will always hear you lieing.


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Well Done! I really like this piece. Well written. 5/5

Posted: Apr 19, 2007

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thx



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