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Was This Paradise?

Poetry By: neverregret
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A poem I wrote out of spite in which I adapted into my own version. Lois Duncan's "Leave Taking"


Submitted:Dec 26, 2009    Reads: 85    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


I never thought it would be Paradise,

I sought a broken journey from the start.

 

No Shame was masked from my eyes,

nor was life’s suffering a guest to my heart.

 

And still, the Earth awoke from under my skin,

and winter lands brushed my frozen hair.

 

I breathed upon the dusk and found it sweet,

I stared upon the dawn and found it fair.

 

I know black anchors where darkness looms, lie silent

and sky bright streams and night galaxies are rich with stars.

 

For all its mistakes, I have loved this World

and found its beauty, despite its scars.

 

Even Angles chorus of Wonders greater still,

I leave in sorrow, much against my will.





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