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A Gleaming Soul

Poem By: Nick Bradley
Poetry


A poem i wrote after finding a friend who taught me how to smile through my body and from my soul. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 28, 2008    Reads: 23    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


A session full of strains
That stored a lifetimes wills
Exclusions depths of moaning
That with amazement fills

Hours and hours of talking
that breaks illusioned minds
A lost soul lost whilst walking
Transpires to logics signs

Tidal waves of emotion
Flood through lifeless holes
A following path of motion
Diverts those gleaming souls.

A special source of wisdom
soothing pain relief
guiding loves expression
repelling static grief

The Gleaming soul unlocked
and freed from natures grasp
glides with deepths of freedom
numbs times frozen pasts.
 
For you hold the power of goodness
Deep within it lies
Breaks to the hearts of passion
And shines through angels eyes

 


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Love it. A few tiny little grammatical mistakes and such, but bloody brilliant piece. Excellently written, I love the structure and flow, the rhymes feel unstressed and really add to the overall feel. Keep writing, keep living, remember, don't conform.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

I loved it Nick, and I can say that I know how you feel. I have a friend like this, he's now my "adopted" big brother. =) This was a very good poem. =)

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Beautiful writing. Indescribable, I'm in utter shock. That was truly amazing! Your writing is so detailed and you have wonderful word choice description. Your writing creates clear images in the mind, it is wonderful, truly wonderful. I especially loved the second stanza, talking about the soul lost and going astray. Well done, I will defintely be reading more of your writing, just let me know when you have some more writing posted, and I'll tae a look! =)
~Maple

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

wow its wonderful i cant wait for more its fatastic, if you have time please read my new story and please leave a comment please ....please....

Posted: Aug 29, 2008



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