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Looking at you

Poem By: NightShaded
Poetry


A poem about looking into your love's eyes and finding everything View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


No one can describe looking into your eyes
A nothing will try..
 
Time stops
…and everyone notices
Eyelids become nonexistent as they bury themselves behind God’s second greatest gift to
     man
They all want to be me
I completely freeze and you are majestically at ease
Cupid’s dart pierces me with serenity
Your elixir shoots through my head to my toes then tidal waves rush towards my soul
My heart slams into my chest every other beat, continually on rhythm
At this point there is always a question: Why this moment has she given? What keeps me from dying now in the eternal bliss of living?
You can take me away in an instant in time
You make the world yours by being alive
The stars were created to reflect beauty and life from your eyes
They spring everything from the nothingness that was once I
 


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Comments:

wow, that's amazing :) really beautiful. When i look into my boyfriends eyes all i see is my reflection, then i have to look away... lol! nice work

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanks so much. if theres anything youd like me to read, id be more than happy too =)

NightShaded:

Just read all of your postings. They were all well written. Gave them all "I Like It" votes.

Thank you for becoming a fan.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate my postings entitled:

1. "Excitement Inspired...",

2. "Our Grampa Ed",

3. "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3",

4. "Limerick For Life",

5. "Self Love",

6. "Here To Stay" &

7. "POEMS".

Again! Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 9, 2008



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