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Fragile You

Poem By: Nihoxdria
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 19, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Dismissed.

Discontent

Disassociated

Your talk is bothering me

Consuming me

Petty.

I want to believe even for an instant

That the words floating by my ear are meant to be

Real

They're not.

Too fragile i break with your vicious attacks

Gossip

Yellow Journalism.

Your talk is bothering me!

Like the weaver of a web too large

your spawn overwhelms the crowds in hoards.

Your dismissal of truth makes lies seem real

the discontented youth

Become idols of fear

Stolen in your dissassociated whirl

Our breaths freeze midair

Gasplessly breaking into your cult of dreary

Reality.

Hush.

Your talk is bothering me.

Cast Vox on your frame with sympathy

And to think

If i hadn't listened I'd still be innocent

Perhaps

It's not your gossip that's destroying me

It's just...

My frailty.

When I choose to listen.


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Comments:

God, does nobody read this stuff? Their loss. (oh, haha, you submitted it today. I knew that) I love it love it love it!!! Don't you EVER stop writing, Nihoxdria! Mucho amore (I THINK that's Italian)
-Rosalie ;)

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Nope sure don't. I like putting stuff out as quickly as possible. It might slow down in updates around chapter 9 though. >_< So much to do!

(withers) You know...That probably made no sense to you >_< Sleep is good. Ok! Let's try this again:

No, i will never stop writing as long as great people like you support me!
Your Italian is beautiful, don't worry.
And I'll put out more writing such as Homodaiga for you ASAP.
(nods) that's a lot better

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Very good peice. I agree with Kaylynn Brookes. It is their loss if people don't read this. Your stuff is great. I am envious. . .

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I really appreciate your opinion but I'll have to disband your envy. Each artist is a masterpiece in itself, you're no different and I'm positive your talent is equally as alluring as mine.



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