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Drowning in You

Poem By: nikkiluv123
Poetry


a girl too much inlove shes drowning in it and its nearly killed her. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 18, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I cant stop falling,

into your gaze,

it still suprisingly,

comes to my amaze.

How God could have created,

something just like you,

and how i wish that you,

were falling for me too.

a wish, an objection,

my life, my world,

my concentration fading,

to a vision very curled.

Twisting and turning,

into something i'm not,

please try and help me out of this plot.

I need to break through,

the bars of this land,

for i'm drowning in you,

sinking in hot sand.

when i get out,

escape from your face,

i will be weak,

and drained of my place.

But when i wake up,

come to common sense,

maybe i'll forget,

who i was, the events.

Will somebody help me?

come strong from the weak,

set my life back on track,

but first hear me speak.

When i look at him,

i get so many feelings,

on your shoulder,

let me weep,

about my past,

about my dealings.

After all of that,

when i'm healthy,

when i'm strong,

i'll listen to your heart,

sing it's sadened song.

xx.

By Nicole Elizabeth Bernadette Brunt


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Comments:

Good poetry. A nice flow, it takes you with it. Very sad too, and something I think a lot of people can relate to. Good stuff.
matmoo :)

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

thanks heaps,
check out some more of me.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008



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