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Its just something that came to my mind when i was pondering over what to do. so unsure of my feelings View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 5, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


At times I sit and wonder

Of things that have occurred yonder

This feeling is so new

This fresh point of view

What has happened to me

Is something I cannot fully see

All this is just like a dream

The sensation of standing in a running stream

When the water tickles my feet

Like a pleasurable treat

I never thought that I’d think like this

And still count it as a bliss

Many times I think that it’s all wrong

But then this feeling goes so strong

I can do nothing but comply

And sit down to reply

To a mail sent from a hundred miles

Which fills me with a thousand smiles


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Reminded me of hunting turtles in my boyhood standing in the water

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

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Thanx

I liked this one better then the other one. It reminded me of a summer day.

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx

really good! it reminds me of when i was five and we'd go to our cottage at the cape and hunt little tadpoles in the lakes [: *sigh* trips down memory lane, gotta love 'em [:

Posted: Mar 6, 2008

Author Comment:

well i suddenly remembered that this uncertain feeling was similar to what i felt when i had gone for a holy dip in Ganges so put the analogy here. but tadpoles surely sound more interesting [:)]

Very enjoyable well written too Juliet

Posted: Mar 6, 2008

Author Comment:

is it gud enough?i thought that it was rather childish

veracity
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impressive work.......

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx



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