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I was really upset at the time I wrote this thing. I wanted to get out of a situation but didnt see any way. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 5, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


A thousand little things went by,

So many hopings.

All my dreams cast so high,

All the steep slopings.

Cast adrift is what I am,

All hopes lost in me.

My dreams shattered with a bam,

As lost as could be.

Lost and gone forever forever,

Leaving me alone.

To be found oh never oh never,

I can’t even moan.

Which new path should now I take?

But, none will take me.

What destiny foe me God did make?

What end did he see?

Come down oh God, where are you?

Am I in your care?

Tell me my Guide what to do?

Lift me from despair.


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What happened to make u so mad, just wondering. I hope everything is k. O, and great poem.

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

Author Comment:

things keep happening n i keep getting mad

GOD always works in good time

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes "in good time"

I think that you may have been doubting your faith, but don't worry God is always there. Even when you don't think that he is.

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Doubt is what strengthens the faith in the end

You know what they say God works in misterious ways.....have faith....Juliet

Posted: Mar 6, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah i have faith in Him...but u know he does test it sometimes

awsome???....words can't describe it for me....

Posted: Mar 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

very nice

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

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i hv all d superlative words 4 this work.....feelings r just cascading over screen, my mind nd say what not. Bravo!!!

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

impressive



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