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When dreams are shattered

Poem By: Nishimura Miharu
Poetry


Tags: lament

I wrote 5 poems in one go.This is the 1st one i wrote. I was in a very gloomy mood. Its not to describe how i was feeling but lets c how have i done. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 31, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


When dreams are shattered

life goes on

A drudgery life

to trudge along

When my mind went back

to that fateful day

a single 'no'

ruined my way

I remember well

how I had said 'no'

and that very day

had cried so

The tears are dry

the cheek are stained

my eyes still red

heart still pained

A single hour has passed

It was just yesterday

When a single 'no'

ruined my way


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Comments:

The sun comes out after the rain clouds

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

So it does but my monsoon has stayed just too long

Sounds like a kid when a mother said that they couldn't have a toy, but at the same time it is an adult outlook on the topic so it has to be something important. I liked it.

Posted: Nov 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hmmmm. thats a new point of view. thank you



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Other writing by Nishimura Miharu So much n so little Ahhhhhh Musings "To be or not to be" Break free More..



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