When dreams are shattered
I wrote 5 poems in one go.This is the 1st one i wrote. I was in a very gloomy mood. Its not to describe how i was feeling but lets c how have i done.
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Submitted: Mar 31, 2008
Reads: 38
Comments: 2
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When dreams are shattered
life goes on
A drudgery life
to trudge along
When my mind went back
to that fateful day
a single 'no'
ruined my way
I remember well
how I had said 'no'
and that very day
had cried so
The tears are dry
the cheek are stained
my eyes still red
heart still pained
A single hour has passed
It was just yesterday
When a single 'no'
ruined my way
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Comments:
The sun comes out after the rain clouds
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
Sounds like a kid when a mother said that they couldn't have a toy, but at the same time it is an adult outlook on the topic so it has to be something important. I liked it.
Posted: Nov 10, 2008
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