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you're just like water

Poem By: nitrolad
Poetry


a tear dropping poem.. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Your just like water

so teasing yet so near my grasp,

though you tease me with your words

you still weep unforgettable tears,

your green with envy as always,

and red with anger...


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Comments:

Its so powerful..!
I loved it :)

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the comment
-_- (^_^) *_*

hi! nitrolad. what a lovely description of a tear, which we just wipe away. thoughtful. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for the comment.



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