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This is just a bit of fun. Oh and for anyone who doesn't know, Button Moon was a children’s programme that I still love (and have the DVD for... opps, probably shouldn't admit things like that). :)
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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 82 Comments: 15 Likes: 9
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Wow, so nice and cheery, it flows great and it has some of my favorite things too. Ted
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Ah, I love it! I feel like I got to know you even more by knowing all the thing you like! I didn't know what some of them were (hobnobs?), but that doesn't matter! And it rhymed too! :)
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
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Posted: Jul 6, 2008
really well done. did enjoy this, flows well and is very upbeat. since you have written this in one flow then 'the's this time are more important to include - I'm not obsessed with them! great stuff.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
That was so nice Nixie. If you had been with me a couple of hours ago you would have had a lot of mown grass to smell.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Lol! I love it Nixie! I'm so glad you wrote it! Its sweet and joyous and simply wonderful! It seems like you're not only describing things you love, but also yourself. I love, love, love it! :)
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
When I read your poem I can taste and smell, the smell of cut grass really all of it I love too...Great fun Olwen
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
What a delicious little ditty.
We should all do this as a personal self ego boost.
Love it!
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Just loved it!! so so so so so so so sweet!! OMG! i'm gonna have to say this but this is one of the best poems ive read yet! its simple and it made me smile!! wow nixie, you just made my day!
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Besides raindrop on roses and whiskers on kittens…These are a few of our favorite things, Baby elephants (any baby animal), smell of freshly cut grass, Cherry (almost every flavor) ice cream, azure blue sky and fluffy white clouds, Autumn trees (I life in New England, USA, we have the most breath taking scenery in the fall, as well as the other seasons), sunsets and sunrises, shooting stars, late night drives (up the coast or through farm land), hot baths, the sound of rain (and the smell), photography, chocolate (come on, who doesn’t like chocolate, I prefer dark chocolate, though), sleeping till whenever, my morning brew (Sumatra, Sulawesi, Kenyan, espresso…) and MY little ol’ thems.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
aww...this is adorable and so are u, Nix...really lovely..."precious things" to you ;D
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
late night drives, and shooting stars...awwwwww!!
My favorite things.....also, a favorite of mine is playing the piano, and violin. Love it! I enjoyed getting to know you a bit! I had fun reading this....it was great!
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
This was a really great idea, Nixie! A list like this makes you realize how many wonderful things there are to experience. I'm feeling inspired to make a list of my own, but I don't think I could make it rhyme :/ Would you mind if I stole your idea and made my own list?
Stephanee :)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
I really like this.
Makes you smile when you think of the wonderful world and all the things that make life worth living. Most of the times its the simple things.....
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
ONE OF THE BEST POEMS FROM NIC...U know how to wave MAGIC and this is nothing but PERFECT AND FLAWLESS....
MY FAVOURITE....
the word 'baby elephant' caught my attention...u know what NIC?...i look like it and my husband gets confused....hee hee....
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
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