Love is a snake, with kissing venom lips
The bite is sometimes softer
than you realise or dare admit
Silver slithering silk climbing limbs of youth
Until one day your heart is black with poison
And the snake has become you
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Submitted: Nov 10, 2007 Reads: 64 Comments: 6 Likes: 7
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Depth; insightful.Good.
Posted: Nov 10, 2007
insightful indeed...
Silver slithering silk climbing limbs of youth...brilliant line Nixie...well said.
~leesah
Posted: Nov 11, 2007
Beautiful poem, but I sure hope love isn't like that! I wouldn't know. I'm just thirteen. :-)
Posted: Nov 11, 2007
Hey Nixie :) Kinda scary this one :) it is very interesting. (smile)
Posted: Nov 11, 2007
Lionheart
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[shivers]
chilling to the point where one says its true. But only those who have been bitten. I guess i was bitten once, but now the snake tends my wounds, if that makes any sense at all to you hahahah.
(i think i am a snake now, but without fangs hahah, sorry, im just amusing myself, and i-- sorry haha)
Short but direct. :)
Posted: Nov 13, 2007
Ooh, love it! I think we can all honestly say that we have felt that way at some point! Scarily real.
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
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