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I guess we all struggle to see who we are sometimes, this is me giving myself a kick start. :) View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 Reads: 66 Comments: 17 Likes: 23
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Nice if you can do that, a very worthwhile trait. Economically expressed.
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
We all need to regroup every now and then and solidify. Sometimes I will cry a lot and pray and look at myself and see a shambles, but after a while I am encouraged in the Lord and feel better and stronger.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
We can't always be 100% self-assured, peoples opinions cloud our judgement, our own sense of right and wrong can sometimes distort things. The only real way we can "reset" ourselves so to speak is by taking yourself out the loop have some reflection time, glavanise yourself and get back out there.
Hope you are now ready, willing, and good to go. :-D
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
we all need a wake up at times and see who we really are. sometimes the only person who can do that is our own self.
nice:) lexie
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
I think it was really pretty and had a sense of serenity to it that was nice. There's a steely strength, survival and a touch of surrender in it. (I don't know why all the S words!) This again has the delicate touch that you always have in your poetry. (Secom?)
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Aaaah! SOLIDIFY! Something that I certainly need to do sometime soon. I think this poem is going to be an inspiration for me!
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
I really like this poem. We all do need change in our lives. You truly touched me with this one. Excellent job. :)
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
yes, that happens once and a while, we lose ourselves and need to regroup again...well expressed, it was brilliant as always Nixie:P
Steph(:
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Nixie such an intersting poem and like evryone else i agree we all need to take a step back and review where our next steps will be......I tend to do this alot it helps me reach my goals......great poem take care till later juliet
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
YES it indeed is the time to 'solidify' myself too....all ur poems r such an encouragement.....thanks NIC
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
and when that happens, you release a happy sigh.
wonderful poem Nixie.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Ah! I love it! I had to re-read the second stanza cause my brain was filling in the words. But then I read it again and it was genius. I could read it over and over again. And have!
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
^^Yes,Dear it is right that,whenever we think about it make us nervous and try to bring near in our beliefs.Well there is a beautiful Line in Sri Guru Granth Sahib Ji(Sikh religions holy scripture,also known as living Spiritual word Master)that,"Fruitful is that moment,and fruitful is that time,when one is in with the Love of True Lord" I think it's abslouetly right,and i think you too,agree with this.Well,Small slice of life.
By the way i am very sorry that i didn't reply over your comment that you gave at 'God's Word',actually since last one and half week, i didn't login into my account,that's why i didn't reply.I think that you forgive me for this.
God bless you.
Your brother-VICKY.punne4e
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
Sometimes we have to stop and look inside , to see what is calling us to get out, great one .
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
Another wonderful poem Nixie.
Sometimes we do need to step back and give ourselves a good kicking out of our routines and comfort zones.
Its such a wonderful feeling when you get your drive back and achieve so much more.
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
We start finding ourselves when we're lost. Losing is part of the entire process of finding and discovering what is and what is not. We do get lost and when we're found, we'll have a better perspective of things and then there comes CHANGE. It's gonna be a very challenging journey.
I love your poem.
Very encouraging. ^^
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
here's a random comment - this poem looks like a snowman
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
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