WOW/ That is a sad poem. But it is also a very powerful one too. I really like this, it shows such strong emotions and you didn't have to use long descriptive words. Bravo my friend. Excellent job. And good luck on the novel that you are working on. :) - Michael

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

My goodness.
Have lived this and I HAVE SURVIVED!
So can you.
Big Smooooch.

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Hey Nixie! This is a very sad but yet so powerfull poem. It make you think and break your haert all at the same time...
Loved it! Thank you for the nice work.
Hope you felt better after this and know that every dark cloud has a silver lining... Weather it was because of a lover or just because of friend or just having a bad day always remember!!!!

MEL x x

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Hey Nixie, glad this is an old one - otherwise you may find me on your doorstep brandishind red wine and supportive vitriol. Can't wait to read your novel!

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Nic, you know what - these sentiments are what were expressed by someone to me once, and I pooh-poohed his words, saying he was being too sentimental. Having read your poem, I suddenly feel as if I might have been too mean and harsh. Somehow the written words make so much more sense compared to the spoken ones. Gosh, the follies of youth... Nic, Nic, I don't know how you manage to say so much with such few words!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Some of the most deep and provocative thought can so easily be written in the space of a few minutes. Maybe because the intensity of the emotion at that time is such that if you can grab a pen and a bit of paper and write it down, can make for a poem that comes out as fantastically as this, as opposed to something that has been studied at, poured over for hours analising and reanalising nipping here - tucking there.....

I'm rambling, ace one mate, always a pleasure to read. :-)

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

I don't know what exactly to say about it , but to go ahead is the best way . I would say that this is not a good thing , but now i see that bad people , bad fellings , bad things , all bring a new chance to us improve ourselfs.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Sometimes the capturing of a simple moment, truth, and emotion, is enough to evoke so much more feeling and inspiration, than a page of well written lines; poignant and touching Nixie, capture the moment~well done, ~rain

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

such a sad poem , so pleased you survived the experience old girl , i couldnt survive on here without you . a very few inspire me . you are one of them . this poem should say why .

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Oooh, another sad one. Been there. The emotional rollercoster of love. Nice one, Nixie. Thanks for sharing.

Hope all is well,

Ted

Posted: Sep 4, 2008