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I actually got this idea from a sign my aunt has in her house with the words, "Life is a journey" written on it. It somehow inspired me to write this.
Creative criticism is always welcome, too!
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Submitted: Aug 8, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
Life's a journey,
A twisting, winding road,
Often left unpaved,
With chapters left untold.
A jack-in-the-box,
A song of every kind,
An unlocked journal,
A state of mind.
Every life's a different story,
With chapters that intertwine,
A romance and a horror,
Where verses seldom rhyme.
Life's a journey,
A forest of emotion,
A battle to survive,
A city of commotion.
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Well done, nice flow to it. For some reason I do think it would flow better if the poem ended with 'A battle to survive'.
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
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