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Eyes (November)

Poem By: November
Poetry


Tags: eye, eyes, november

Have you ever looked into someone's eyes? I mean really LOOKED? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 28, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Eyes

Look into my eyes and
tell me what you see.
Tell me if you see anything at all.

Can you see that I'm empty?

Can you see straight through me?
Can you see why I'm not smiling?
Can you see the swirling pools of blue,
or the things that humans do?

Can you see that I'm empty?

Can you see what I’ve made?
can you tell I'm afraid?
can you see my emotions?
Or just an iris, cornea,
lens and fovea?

Can't you see that I am empty?

Look into my eyes and
tell me what you feel.
Tell me if you feel anything at all.


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Comments:

Irwin
(not registered user)

Yrs I like it, simple but effectcive.

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Cheers
x

Eye's are the mirror of the soul-so they say

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Then what if your eyes are empty?
x

This grabs the mind. a good little read.

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank youy very much
x

i bet you i could see everything about you through your eyes. you can tell a lot about people through their eyes. most people aren't deeper than a kiddy pool so they are oblivios. cheer up though. can't be that bad. everyones afraid, at one point everyone feels no substance to life, you just have to deal for now.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the read y comment.
x



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