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Challenging myself with a poem =/ well, my first serious poem. Feedback totally appreciated.

Submitted:Aug 13, 2009    Reads: 168    Comments: 20    Likes: 5   


breathless beauty,

wonderous bliss,

nothing to miss.

air in my face,

wind in my hair.

no where to go,

nothing to care.


Fast as lightning,

free as an eagle,

let your spirit fly,

time passing you by.

be yourself,

no one else,

it doesn't matter,

who you are

or where you're going.

all that matters




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