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Bone-White

Poem By: Obi Shaw
Poetry


Death. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


He reaches for my ankles with

bone-white fingers

and a calm, toothy smile.

 

Screaming high and kicking hard,

I call for friendless help that can

never find and never touch me.

 

Beneath his endless waters,

I hold my air, tight, to live

but find I can breathe, thick and slow.

 

He holds me in his gentle arms, and

bone-white wings

unfold from my trembling back.

 

We soar into the cloudy sky,

where he smiles, nods his head,

and lets me go.


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Comments:

Good work, I love the line "bone-white wings
unfold from my trembling back."

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! This is the first comment I received on Booksie, so it means a lot to me that you took the time to offer it (and that you liked my poem). Thanks again.



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