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Submitted: Mar 5, 2008 Reads: 367 Comments: 8 Likes: 5
Ladybird Hands
Fortune follows you where I can’t
No envy
Just wishes
(It crawls up one finger)
The ease of it all, intoxicating
Weightless
Unencumbered
(Now the second)
Laugh like glitter in a jar
Somewhere else
I am you
(Reaches the third)
Promise you’ll come back
Promise
Before you
(Fourth now)
Fly away
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Aaah! (Ladybird, ladybird fly away...home?) Liked it, October.
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Quirky little poem which I enjoyed.
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Putting the question to a point
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
Perfect. Never have read something like this before. You are enjoyable.
Posted: Mar 5, 2008
This is sweet, every time I see a ladybird I shall be reminded of this poem and smile! ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 6, 2008
You certainly have a gift with poetry. I've enjoyed all your work!
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
Hey OO! Another great piece from your pen. 'No envy, just wishes'..Bitterweet and effective. Like it.
Posted: Mar 10, 2008
Such a beautiful poem ^_^
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
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