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Submitted: Aug 23, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
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HAVE TO MAKE WAVES
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
Ah, don't you hate that! All that effort to be noticed and heard, and you get the simplicity of ignorance?! Women are complicated and I like that, I say put your whole foot in next time!
Lovely writing again, O. ~ Nixie
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
Thats was very nice
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
You know October O...it's like a little treat for me to come to your page and read your poetic charm.
I just adore your writing.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
October: You really enjoy your extended metaphor when talking of love/lust/romance call-it-what-will, but this way of working does make the poet work to find the mot juste. And you do it well.
Good to see you back on my first visit for months. I thought that you had fallen out with the Muse.
Are you Liz Lochead trying stuff out?
ATB
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
again, awesome and totally different, from what I have been reading lately ;)
-Meg-
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
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