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Submitted: Mar 7, 2008 Reads: 211 Comments: 8 Likes: 7
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I love the ending
and the journey.
craaig
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
The ending made it for me too, I have so many unjoined dots but I kind of like it that way. Aewsome read, October ~ KB
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
I think this is my favourite so far, October. Like a lot.
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
A map cloak - some way to dance through life - maybe a poka-dot
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
I sense the thread of wanderlust. Great write. Ricky.
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
Wow, this has to be one of the most unique and beautiful poems I have read here on booksie. After reading this, I closed my eyes for a while and reread it in my mind, with a grin becoming wider and wider. It is just so thrilling to come across such a beautiful piece of work. I'm going to read more of your poems over the weekend.
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
The way you normally leave us to work out the meanings or draw our own conclusions is always a favourite as its such fun to see different peopels interpretation of the things you write.
Knowing this piece is family-tree inspired adds a new and special layer to an already wonderful piece of writing. Finding out about families are so interesting, especially if there is a skeleton or two!
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
*Also please excuse the awful grammatical errors, was doing two things at once typing the above comment and being male, failed at both!
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
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