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Submitted: Mar 7, 2008 Reads: 88 Comments: 10 Likes: 8
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Stunning brilliant, vibrant imagery. "Weaving across the flats
In a heat haze"
very nice!
matmoo :)
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
Fantastic, especially then ending:
"Some punctuated horizon
Geography failed him"
Sergio Leone, well yes I can see what you mean in terms of the image it builds. I like!
Jameson,
Posted: Mar 7, 2008
Reminds me of the three fates and their forever winding web! I'm really enjoying your work October. ~ KB
Posted: Mar 8, 2008
The image it conjures, I love it! The feeling is both that of familiarity, but equally mystery.. I get a picture of hot dusty reds and a cool turquoise sky.
Posted: Mar 8, 2008
So powerful.
i do not want to weaken that comment with other thoughts.
So powerful.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
but did you?
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
I don't wish to know of course, for that ambivalence is what make the poem what it is above and beyond the imagery.
This is: maybes aye or maybes naw in poetry; that keeps the reader thinking and keep a group of creative writer hopefuls going forever.
Posted: Mar 10, 2008
Impressive poem.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
I quite like this. I'm not usually a huge poetry fan but this is nice.
Posted: May 11, 2008
I love the ambiguity of this, did you, didn't you, if he knows is he aware?
Brilliant, no more, no less. :-)
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
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