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Believing in me

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry


Believeing in yourself and others View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 29, 2008    Reads: 78    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


I went from day to day

Not really living staying the same

My life was very dull

Until you came

 

You lit up my life

You showed me the way

You accept me and

Listen to each word I say

 

Now my life is bright

Cause you believe in me

I know where I belong

You taught me to see

 

You light up my life

You showed me the way

You accept me and

Listen to each word I say

 

I know which way to go

You pointed it out

You shared the truth

And what it’s about

 

You light up my life

You showed me the way

You accept me and

Listen to each word I say

 

 

You light up my life

You showed me the way

You accept me and

Listen to each word I say

 

I’ll follow that path

You showed to me

It’s the right way

The right way for me

 

You light up my life

You showed me the way

You accept me and

Listen to each word I say

 

You showed me that path

Cause you believe in me


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Comments:

Oh my gosh... it's great that this person finally found someone to hang onto^_^! I loved this poem-- I don't know why, but I'm a sucker for repeated lines. They remind me of song lyrics-- and I'm a music person. BIG TIME!!!!! This kind've reminds me of my life a bit... 'cause for a time when I moved from one coast to the other a few years ago-- everything was kind've dark in my life... there was practically nothing. Then voila!! I finally found some passions and many friends, and I'd found my light:)!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, acutually this was intended to be a song, I wrote the lyrics but could never find music that went well with it.
~Kaori

Once again I just loved the repetition! It's really strong, and actually kind of sweet. This was so nicely written that I'm speechless! I agree with ghiradelli girl again. I used to be way WAY deep down in the dark until I found one of my best friends, and he led me from that darkness into the light. This poem really makes me remember him, and I think that's one of the important thing that you're telling us in this poem. Wonderful wonderful job:)

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I wrote it as a tribute to a friend who w there for me when I really needed it.
~Kaori

i love this poem

Posted: Apr 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks

ha ha ha once again i like it just like everyone else

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Is that all you can say Noel??? Seriously where's some individuality? JK JK. You know I'm kidding. Thanks
~Kaori

I could sing this song...this is really mindblowing....sincere throughout

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I've been trying to write the music, but nothing seems to fit the mood.
~Kaori



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