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Cries in the Dark

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry


Cries in the dark, will anyone hear. This was written about my uh, for lack of a better word, emo situation I was in about eight months ago. Its kind of embarassing to talk about though so that's why it took me so long to actually publish this. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2008    Reads: 68    Comments: 8    Likes: 3   


I cry in the dark,

I'm all alone now

At least that's what I feel,

No one sees who I am,

No one sees the hurt I feel,

I feel alone, there's no one here,

All that's here is a razor,

It calls to me.

The blade bits my skin,

The red blood stands out,

It drips down my wrist,

It comforts me,

The tears stream down my face,

The pain hurts me deep,

The pain pinches my chest

I find it hard to breathe.

The dark is never ending

The razor cuts deep,

The pain cuts deeper

No one ever saw

No one ever thought

No one ever cared,

No on ever heard my

Cries in the dark


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Comments:

wow, this is amazing!! it's good to express your feelings! and i know exactly how you feel, kind of what i'm going through. great poem, you really expressed it sooo well!! :)

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry you're going through this. It's really hard to deal with and its not really accepted in a lot of cultures. thanks for reading

Good poem huh! maybe you will like some of my poems since it is somewhat similar to this. try to read some of them..

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I've read some of your poems. They are really great.
~kaori

Kaori - This is an amazingly sad poem. You do a great job of pertraying the isolation that you felt. I hope everything is better now. - Rose

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh yeah, everything is better. I wish it hadn't happened in the first place, but at least it showed me how shallow a person my boyfriend was.(He dumped me, the stupid prat) Oh well, all's well that ends well. :)
Thanks for reading.
~Kaori

Oh GOD,....it's so touchy.....it's so different

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I wrote it as a slight memoir-type poem, just because when I went through that period of trouble, it was really hard to communicate, so this is what I was trying to say.
~Kaori

Very raw emotions there. I used to cut myself a lot. I found out that most people saw my loneliness and tried reaching out to me. I just never reached back out to them. So glad things are better for you now.
MA

Posted: May 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad that other people when through that too even though it wasnt very fun to go through. I've stopped and feel so much better, but it is still a hard thing to talk about because in society it's taboo.

Thanks for reading
~kaori

This is great poem.I like it.Its sad.Im sorry if you feel like that,alot of ppl do.Me either.Well,great poem.:)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I don't feel like that anymore but I used to.

Thanks.

~Kaori

It's a poem which depicts ur true feelings and since u r able to 'connect' to them....and identify them, u r able to 'channelise' ur thoughts....and write such beautiful lines.....

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw thanks. I'm glad you saw it that way.
~Kaori

I feel that way still hee hee though I'm really glad you got out of it honey I tried to help you.

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I still feel this way sometimes. I really appreciate you trying to help. . . maybe I should have been there to help you.
~Kaori



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