Steady
Sturdy
Never Yeilding
Forever strong
It hides it's secrets
Away within it's rings
Locking them away forever
There they will stay now
Hidden inside it's rings
Forever strong
Never yeilding
Sturdy
Steady
Tree trunk
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Hidden Secrets -- Zoe's challenge
Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry
Zoe's challenge. She gave me the subject of a tree trunk . . . . View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 Reads: 28 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
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Wow! You know what I really liked about this poem? You kept it short and basic. It wasn't long and complicated with a whole ton of similes and metaphors and hidden messages. It was easier to read, and much more of a pleasure. I LOVED the style you wrote it in, and I found it very very good. This was a great job on my challenge! Bravo:D
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
Hey buddy the format itself is a tree and it ROCKS...i agree with ZOE word by word.....
SUCH a simple yet powerful poem...Love u sweety
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
short,simple and sweet!
Good work......
~Kritika
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
this is one of my Fav...
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
I liked it lol I like trees
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
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