I'm bowing down to your greatness! Do you know how good this is? Very good!!!! It's awesome. You churned the deep chocolatey depths within me!!! It's so sweet! I don't know why right now... but it kind've reminds me of Lilo and Stitch^_^. I like how the girl looks in the mirror and sees herself as a beautiful girl instead of an ugly person:), all because someone makes her feel and look at herself that way. I wish I had the power to do that for someone...

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Wow you're really good at poetry! This was a new style of poetry, and I thought it was pretty good! It sounded a little like a song, but it was still fantastic. I would usually say that the repetition with the I am the invisible girl thing should be kept to a minimum, but it didn't bother me! I really liked it this way. -copies ghiradelli girl and bows down to your greatness- fabulous piece! Really gives us insight into those who are outside of us.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

wow, this is so amazing!!! great poem! Very well written! well song, is it supposed to be a song?

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

This is so lovely, it makes such a difference to have one person see you for who you are, even if you don't. An inspiring read Kaori! :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

This lovely piece really does beg to have music written for it! I can hear Celine Dion singing it now!!..... a "wonder-full" write. Peace.....Jerry

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

ha ha yeah i agree with everyone else this is great

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

you would never be 'invisible' again especially with those lovely thoughts inside your soul....

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

This is so beautiful, and sad in a way.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Wow, that was good. I can definitely relate to it...

Posted: Sep 15, 2008