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Living and Learning

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry


Living and learning? Will any results show? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 26, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


Living and learning

It’s hard yes I know

Trying and hiding

Everything will show

 

My heart is no longer min

Someone stole it away

It’s hidden inside

That fateful day

 

My heart is now ice

I cannot cry

It’s frozen in ice

To thaw it, I try

 

Living and learning

It’s hard, yes I know,

Trying and hiding

Everything will show


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Trying and hiding

Everything will show

I think I am doing this...and failed as always...

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thanks for reading. I'm pretty sure you haven't failed at everything.
~Kaori

Dear friend,

Living IS Learning.^^

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I know, it's based off a song I was listening to at the time.
~Kaori

yes, living is learning! great poem!!

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.
~Kaori

hi! kaori. DONT hide. where r u. LIVE in my heart. there is lots of room. anytime. ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

AWW thanks.
~Kaori

did not realise i had read this before...this is as fresh as i read the first time....one of my favourites

Keep writing with this honesty buddy....Our good wishes and support and love is always there for you.....

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'm glad it's one of your favorites.
~Kaori



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