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This is for Mae's challenge. The snap is the picture she gave me and this is what I came up with. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 Reads: 35 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
Are we one
Or two?
We don't know
For all our lives
We've been
One, not two
Here's the distinction
Is it better to be
Two, not one?
Two with distinct personalities
Different friends
Two not one.
Until we figure this riddle out
We'll be
One not two
We'll smile
Be normal
One, not two.
When we figure it out
Such joy
Two, not one
No longer a mirror image.
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awe, wow you are amazing, this is soooo good! i like it a lot, a really good interpretation on the picture! great work! :)
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
This is so so cute...i wish the snap would have showed up as well...try resizing or compressing and re posting it...
lovely use of words....playful and so cute...
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
I think that people are always two. One on the outside one on the in.
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
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