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Submitted: May 26, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
The feelings hurt I don’t want to live Why do I feel like dirt? From the love you give I’m trying to listen, I’m trying to love But it’s hard not to miss him Way up above. Why he left, Only God knows, The memories I kept The love really shows. Someday he’ll return, I’ll watch for the day The fires will burn For that day I pray
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what to say after reading this gripping feeling of a person who lost love, true love.
Posted: May 26, 2008
Tomorrow promises wonderful things Kaori, hadn't I told you that? ^^
Good poem,
Take care my man.
Posted: May 27, 2008
wow, this is so good! tomorrow is a new day, full of new experiences. enjoy life!
Posted: May 27, 2008
hi! kaori. lets hope and pray together. keep me posted when he returns. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
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