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Sky's the limit

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry


Dark Skylight's challenge. Sky's the limit. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 28, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Sky's the limit" He said
As his eyes sparkled
The beautiful blue catching the light
 
"It's always the limit
It means you can go
As far as you want Angel"
 
"With your innocent face
And your wings of white
Oh the friends you'll make
The influence you'll have."
 
He kissed my cheek
And filtered into the darkness
There he drew the line.
 
The line I never crossed
Never ever again
He said the sky's the limit
But he never said
how far I could fall.


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Comments:

I love it...just love it...the imagery is spectacular...:) keep writing....take care ...zia

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I'm glad you love it.
~Kaori

Aww this is really swweet and beautiful.Really beautiful!I like it alot!Great great job! :)

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you thank you. I'm glad you like it
~Kaori

twist at the end is lovely...superb....

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I wasn't sure how people would take the twist.
~Kaori



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