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Ultimate Sacrifice for His Happiness --->Hiralarious Challenge

Poem By: OHSHCKaori
Poetry


The ultimate sacrifice, would you do it? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 13, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


It wasn't love, it was happiness

Tearing my heart into nothing more

My heart ached to see him,

Yet I knew he was happy,

His happiness

Was all I ever wanted,

His happiness

Was worth my pain,

It wasn't love, it was happiness

Tearing my heart into nothing more.

It was worth all the pain,

Because I loved him.


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Niceee. Once again, the responses in general have suprised me...not many have been sad which is a bit strange. Anyway, great job..
Btw, that boy suddently popped into my head I read this :P
Muhaha, maybe that's who you were thinking of? :P

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

YEah, he was my old boyfriend and I still like him, but I've realized that as long as he's happy, it doesn't matter how I feel.
~Kaori

Dear Kaori, ur response to Hiralious's comment in the comment box, brought tears in my eyes.....u r such a sweet heart.....ur thinking is vast like a sea....u r selfless and u will see one day the Prince CHARMING just 'PERFECT' for you would arrive....and take u away....
lucky would be the prince who would have you.....

LOVELY EMOTIONS AND EVEN LOVELIER THOUGHTS

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you. I didn't plan on making people cry, but I guess I put the emotion in there so it's bound to have some effect.

Aww if I'm a sweetheart, then what are you?? YOu are my absolute favorite Bookise member!! You're such a sweetie.

Thank you
~Kaori

Ah
Love. :)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, how pathetic, I know.
~Kaori



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