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Our Little Situation

Poem By: Olola
Poetry


This poem is for my best friend. We are going through such a bad stage in our friendship and hopefully we will make it through, no matter who says we can't. Love you, C.G. xx. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 13, 2008    Reads: 93    Comments: 20    Likes: 6   


For C.G.

'Our little situation'

That's what we call it.

We can neither see nor speak to each other,

A rule laid down by my oppressive father.

Why does it always have to be me that's so different?

Different is good, but not this sort of different;

No other person lives their life like this.

The reason he gave was a racial one.

Why does race matter when you love someone?

I lay in bed most nights in tears;

If I can't have you then I don't need a friend

We've made so many plans, which I hope to implement,

Because 8 years is too long a time to forget.

I can't wait until the next 2 years are over.

'Friends 'till we die', you say,

I say, 'best friends forever'.


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Comments:

I like this one a lot, and I'm sure you'll get through this with your friend, you seem so determined too, so I'm sure you will.

Love Always,
Erin

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, Erin. I really hope we get through this too, but on some days it just seems so hard. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks again. Olola.

Eric JHRB Egan
(not registered user)

Stay strong O, I believe in you. Race should not seperate people as it has done that since primitive times, now it is time to expand ourselves. I despise racism. I love everybody. People are people.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Eric. That's why we get on so well, we understand each other & race doesn't mean a thing to us. Your comment is really appreciated. Thanks, Olola.

Leona
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that is a beautiful poem, it brings tears to my eyes. you seem so determined and so strong. do you have someone you can talk to? a student counselor at school, or a mom? if you need help, you should get it.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

That's very much for your concern. I want to talk about but I don't know who to; my mum knows about it but she's sort of powerless in this situation. Perhaps I should talk about it to someone at school but I find it hard to open up to just anyone. I've just got to wait for this dilemma to blow over...Olola.

That was very porwerful. And I'm also sure you'll get through this. I can tell she's a friend worth keeping so don't give up! last line sums it up perfectly.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot. 'She' is a 'he' by the way. Yep he really is a friend worth keeping and I won't give up on our friendship...we've come too far. Olola.

hi! olola. who's cg. be it friendship or love, eight years is a long time to give 'race' as reason. looks like it is one-way traffic. its time u both had a little chat as "friends till we die" means s/he cares for you deeply. don't lose hope. i'll be curious to know where this leads - hopefully in friends being together. get going. girl. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

C.G. is my best friend. The problem isn't actually coming directly from us, but from someone else and it's hard to not let this person affect us. I know we'll get through it, we've been friends for too long, perhaps this is a test of how strong our friendship is. Thanks for your comment. Olola.

race means nothing. be strong dear, you've got a heart full of love and your friend is very lucky. this little situation will be over one day. just don't stop being friends with CG. God bless:) a wonderful poem to be shared by many

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Indiefreak. I totally agree with you. We will never stop being friends. I know it'll be over one day, but it's just a matter of when; two years is a long time to wait and waiting is really painful. Thanks again. Olola.

awwww, this poem really touched me. Race should never seperate anyone, I really feel for you Olola. you expressed your emotion so well it's hard not to feel for you. This was really great!
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Steph, I'm glad you understand. Race means nothing it's what's under the surface that counts. I cannot wait to be free from this oppression. Thanks again. Olola.

Wow, when I got to the end, I wanted to read more. This is a touching poem and I'm very sure you'll get through this just fine. Good luck, nonetheless, and keep up the good work! :)

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Jason George. I know we'll get through it. Thanks a lot again. Olola.

this is sooo good! and i agree, i rather be friends forever than til we die. i hope you get through this! im sure you will! and race really does mean nothing.
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Lemonluv. Nothing matter apart from what's beneath the skin, if only other people could see it the we do...Thanks again. Olola.

very powerful. i wish you the best of luck getting through this rough patch:)

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Catherine. We will, I just know we will. Olola.

very moving and touching!
i really liked this one!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks LeAnne. Olola.

NOOOOOOOOO! why why can't you guys be friends! does this have something to do with race? tooo too sad, you know you should send this to your friend! aaah im so sorry, but very happy about how well done your poem is!
Wishing you all the best!
Wandy.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Wandy for your kind words. Unfortunately, it is about race and we can't really do anything to change things. I have sent this to him and hopefully he'll get it and we'll see his response to this. Thanks again Wandy. Olola.

no matter what happens, you and ur friend would surely make it buddy....trust GOD.

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Pratibha, I know we'll make it and our friendship will be stronger than ever. Olola.

Friendship problems are the worst kind. You never realize how much you depend on somebody til they've been taken out of your life. Good luck, kid.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Eliza, I realise that so I wrote this poem, it's evident in the line 'If I can't have you then I don't need a friend'. Thanks again for the comment. Olola.

A heartbreaking tale, Olola one for which a friendship of so many years is put under immense strain, by a person whose influence is so great, for a reason that couldn't be further from that.

Colour does not matter to a blind man so why should we be so shallow? I don't know how old your dad is or the overall circumstances but the only way situations like this are confined to the dustbin of history is by learning the pain this causes from our parents and NEVER repeating this to our children.

As others have said, be strong, if your friendship is as strong as you describe then it will pan out for the best.

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Jak for your response. I've been telling this friend of mine that if we that if we can survive this then we can survive anything as this could only make our friendship stronger. I know my dad has caused me a lot of pain, this being one of the most painful andI have sworn to myself that I will never cause such pain to my children and those close to me. I don't know why my dad laid down such a rule and to be honest I don't want to know why but he has to except that I live in a society where people of all races live side by side, work together and love each other; so why can't I enjoy the benefits of living in a multicultural society and be friends with who ever I want? All I know is that in September this will all be changing - hopefully...

Thanks again Jak.

Olola.

awww!! U made me so emotional for my best-y!! She's been my BFF for 8 years and I would commit murder for her--seriously--If she called me and was like, "I need help hiding a body." --I'd be like, "Where do I meet u?".---...now that I've gotten morbid, I will say--DON'T give up on ur friendship!! Finding a best friend is like finding a soul mate--it's rare and magical! All my hugs and hopes for u to survive ur dad till u can get out!!! --oh--and I'm SOO jelous ur in london--wicked awesome!--I'm in Houston and we just got hit by a hurricane--LAME!!! HUGS!!!!

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, thanks Penny Ritchie. I hope the hurricane hasn't caused too much damage where you are - London is an absolutely great place. Thanks for the advice; I definitely won't give up on our friendship and I really CANNOT wait to get away from my dad!!!! Thanks again. Olola.

Olola:

Well written! Most effectively heartfelt and emotionally moving. Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Great job.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mr Bradley. Olola.

You've definitely got what it takes to be a poet. Not only can you write great poems but also write EXACTLY as you feel. Believe me you are VERY good. Specially the way you pour out your emotions while keeping them in the form of shape. How sad it must've been for you? Ah... world can be cruel sometimes.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot. Too many compliments...thanks again. I'm glad you liked the poem; you know sometimes I'm not really good at saying how I feel but when I write poetry I find that I do. Olola.

This poem is so good!!!! And I think you and your best friend will make it through. I just changed to a new school, but before I did it was horrible my best friend had to stay at my old school and she got really mad at me. We were on the same soccer team so it was hard for me because she would try to ignore me and our team wouldn't know what to do. But after she finally decided to listen to me and hear what was going on she forgave me and we are closer than before which I didn't think possible, the hardships make us strong. This poem is beautiful!!! Keep me posted on your writing!

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww, thanks a lot Spaxx. I also reckon thiss will make our friendship stronger. I will definitely keep you posted on my writing and I will try and check out yours whenever I can. Olola. By the way it's 'football' not 'soccer', lol! Thanks again.

liked the theme, emotions were clear
resolve and frustration was felt simultaneously
Best of luck with this ordeal

Posted: Sep 26, 2008



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