Bubbly Girl
There once was a girl who could write
But sadly it wasn't quite right
They all laughed and jeered
Those damned peers, put her in tears
but their bark was much worse then their bite

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This is a response to Bubbly's challenge
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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
Bubbly Girl
There once was a girl who could write
But sadly it wasn't quite right
They all laughed and jeered
Those damned peers, put her in tears
but their bark was much worse then their bite
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hi! olwen. u've put me to shame. i've to brush up my art. this is CREATIVITY. this is spontaneous and this is cheered. lovely. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
This is pure delight. How did you come up with this. Terrific.
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
It has depth. It is witty and it is simply superb. Keep rolling.
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
Today is the day of limericks. First bubbly, craaig, urja, others and now this one. I've had a rollicking time reading this. You are tops.
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
What a nice little poem! I can actually relate, I am dyslexic and no one in my family ever gave my writing the time of day. Not that it stopped me. This was sad but cute and a nice ode to keep remember going! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
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