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Bubbly Girl

Poem By: Olwen
Poetry


Tags: limerick, bubbly

This is a response to Bubbly's challenge
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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Bubbly Girl

There once was a girl who could write
But sadly it wasn't quite right
They all laughed and jeered
Those damned peers, put her in tears
but their bark was much worse then their bite


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hi! olwen. u've put me to shame. i've to brush up my art. this is CREATIVITY. this is spontaneous and this is cheered. lovely. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL you inspired me!!! thanks Bubbly

This is pure delight. How did you come up with this. Terrific.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Bubbly inspired me ;-) THanks you for your comment ;-)

It has depth. It is witty and it is simply superb. Keep rolling.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much it was fun Olwen

Today is the day of limericks. First bubbly, craaig, urja, others and now this one. I've had a rollicking time reading this. You are tops.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you fellow Canadian.. never tried limericks before thank you Olwen

What a nice little poem! I can actually relate, I am dyslexic and no one in my family ever gave my writing the time of day. Not that it stopped me. This was sad but cute and a nice ode to keep remember going! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 27, 2008



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