Grounded

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Poem By: Olwen
Poetry

Tags: spirit, drama, relationships, poetry, body, emotions, grounded, accepted, guided, angels

An interesting look inside of me...and my ever present spirit View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 5, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 3 Likes: 1

Mind is quick, body is quick, so hard to slow down.

Drama's unfold tantilizing entertaining us

Spirit laughs aware of our earthly attractions

Let go of the feeling as our body and mind race

I land on my feet, down from free flight

Grounded? not really

Remember I laugh, begin again and again and again

My words spill forth at times, unconsciously, swinging, leaping

Exciting, unaware of the outcomes.......

Keep trying sooths my soul, humming, quietly reminding me

Hold my hand again my love and I will guide you

Safe again, tingling warm accepted

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Comments:

I could be wrong, and probably am, but this makes me think you're saying despite all that has passed, good and bad times, or previous mistakes you're asking for acceptance. You also seem to be warning someone that you’re not perfect but you keep trying and that's enough for you. Like I say I could be wrong, be either way this is a lovely poem! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

This is my interpretation between myself the person, and my soul..all loving and yes you keep trying to be the best person, because that is when we are truly at peace. thanks you Dixie

Olwen

This is my interpretation between myself the person, and my soul..all loving and yes you keep trying to be the best person, because that is when we are truly at peace. thanks you Dixie

Posted: Jul 6, 2008