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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 9 Likes: 6
Many writers spill their words, on this site to find their worth
Others words create a fire, comments gush, knowone tires
To start so low to climb the ladder, I like yours, does that matter
Many reads with not to say, is it crap, please, please do say
Add more fire, add more tears, thow in some love thow in more fear
Is that enough to gain your attention, unspoken rule that is not broken
So try and try and try we must, please read our work and move us up
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Touché'! :) This is so easy to relate to here on Booksie, and comments make such a difference. Without comments I wouldn't be here, they keep me writing. You will have to forgive me if my comments aren't great, I'm pretty tired, but there's a nice feel to this. I'm sure every one of us here on Booskie have felt this, I know I have. ~ Nixie
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
This was really fun to read. I'm a sucker for cadence (too many years of reading Dr. Seuss to my son I think) and this one fairly flows off the tongue.
And you're right, comments are important. Response and feedback are the life's blood to those who are brave enough to put their words, in whatever form, on paper.
I've never felt particularly qualified to critique another's work. I'm a better proofreader than anything else! What I am reasonably sure I am qualified for though is to know when I like it.
I like it. Sheryl
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
This is very correct and in tune with booksie. I do enjoy comments and hope they are not behind sunglasses. However, at the end of the day, I write for the passion in it no matter what anyone says.
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
I liked it. It kind of made me laugh a little because it is so true not only on this site or even in writing but in everything. People live for other people (usually).
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
hi! ur poem is every writer's dream. for v all crave for a strong reader presence on each of our work. it fills our hearts. it gives us hope that v did write something. comments r indication how well the work has been received. and the writer gets an impetus to better it in his next.
i like the very thought of this poem. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
I Liked That. It Makes Alot Of Sense.
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
True, True, True...I write because I love to do it, but I love the comments. I, too, would not be on the site if there was no feedback. I can't let it rule me though. I desire true feedback, good and bad. It helps me hone my craft. Thanks for sharing, Ted
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
Written in just, but spoken volumes. Love it
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
i like it awesome job!
Posted: Jul 24, 2008
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