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In His Arms

Poem By: Olwen
Poetry


A poem about love and acceptance.. thank you S. I appreciate your comments View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 168    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


When I am in your arms
the moment is clear
the connection complete
two hearts in unison.
When I am in your arms
the brilliance unfolds
the tenderness flowing
two souls fully listen.
When I am your arms
the kiss heals intently
the sound fills the silence
two hands joined again


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Aw, another great one. This makes me think of the saying silence is louder than words. I think those silent connections are the best, the ones where words are not needed, and there's a lot of trust in that too. My muse is starting to itch! Ha! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Dixie silence can be powerful with the right person..I was very much in love at that time of my life, fully accepted....Olwen

Thanks Dixie silence can be powerful with the right person..I was very much in love at that time of my life, fully accepted....Olwen

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

i like it keep up the good work

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks sweet...Olwen

fhorce
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When I am in your arms
every moment creates desire
the passioned flow of connectedness
rivered and bold but chaste intuitively.

When I am in your arms,
my soul echos the purposeful hours
the trust that as iron's birth is fire,
a heart must be tested to breathe true.


..a powerful poem and in my humility,,,suggested a few more stanza's.....love flows in words

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Hello Stephen
Nice addition to the poem..thank you, you are genious
Olwen

nice.....

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Sweet and intimate. I like that better than words. ^^

Nice one, Olwen! ^^

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much.. Olwen



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