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A poem about love and acceptance.. thank you S. I appreciate your comments View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 5, 2008 Reads: 168 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
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Aw, another great one. This makes me think of the saying silence is louder than words. I think those silent connections are the best, the ones where words are not needed, and there's a lot of trust in that too. My muse is starting to itch! Ha! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Thanks Dixie silence can be powerful with the right person..I was very much in love at that time of my life, fully accepted....Olwen
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
i like it keep up the good work
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
When I am in your arms
every moment creates desire
the passioned flow of connectedness
rivered and bold but chaste intuitively.
When I am in your arms,
my soul echos the purposeful hours
the trust that as iron's birth is fire,
a heart must be tested to breathe true.
..a powerful poem and in my humility,,,suggested a few more stanza's.....love flows in words
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
nice.....
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
Sweet and intimate. I like that better than words. ^^
Nice one, Olwen! ^^
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
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