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A Little Extra Spice

Poetry By: Ousma

An interpretive observation, exploring the potential point of view of a friend.

Submitted:Apr 16, 2012    Reads: 67    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   

She's not so different from me-

I mean -

Look at our grades

We study;

Diligent students

We dress tastefully,

Elegant and sharp

…with a little leg

And our hair is long

Silken brunette waves

Hers is a bit more curly- wild

But I guess that's the symbol

Of what sets us


She laughs like a mystic moonbeam

Invites with smoldering eyes

Marked with a mischief gleam

She walks with a confidant step

Sure of herself, beautifully free

Her lips blossomed and wet

She holds his arm

Like a lady

Very delicate, classy-

But I see her fearlessly sneak

A grab, a slap, a touch

And she kisses him with a burning

That I yearn for so much

And I think:

"She's not so different from me"

Yet her life is brimming

With sweet love

A perfect mixture of

Commitment and play

Her skin is alive with sensation

Her lusts and instinctive desires

Are passionately fulfilled-

And even overflow-

That wild, seductive hair of hers

I know

Is the symbol

Of our difference

Of her success

(My failure)

She effortlessly exudes

Such confidence, delightful purpose

I rise early each morning

To apply some smooth powder

Give my pale cheeks a blush

My plain eyes a pop

But she-

She sleeps longer

Her only routine:

Letting her hair down

I am pretty-

Truly! I am!

Pretty like her

Maybe I even have

A shadow, a hint

Of sexy

Yet I have never felt

The burning touch of a man

The brush of soft lips

And here I am!

On the brink of womanhood!

I flaunt my looks

But she-

She exhibits charisma

Starts fires with her

Exotic spark

She is so vibrant, tempting

And I, well I

Am just so shy

So cautious, so…


I lack that excitement

Men seek to gain

That extra little spice

To make the bread rise

To inspire commitment, lust

…And love…


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