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Someone asked me that if they couldnt have all of me if they could have only a little bit. And this was it: the little bit View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
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I love this, and I think that you should get published-I have read many writers here, some being really big on vocabulary at the ages of thirteen, fourteen, but that doesn't make you a GREAT writer-anyway, I like the level of intimacy that you put into your works, and the illusion you create for the reader, as well as the graceful vibe that you contribute, so I am giving u and 'I liked it'......:D
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
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