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Submitted: Dec 6, 2007 Reads: 81 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
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Lovely! :-) ~ K
Posted: Dec 6, 2007
Wow!
Amazing!
I absolutely love it!!!
Posted: Dec 6, 2007
Yes it is an Awesome write. I would have used 'WOW' and Amazing! but Tess already did Lol. no but really it is very, very good!
Posted: Dec 7, 2007
cool. well done. great read. really like it.
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
Ahhh!! You made me have a hysterical fan screaming moment!!
Truly one of your best pieces. Beautiful words, so haunting and truthful. It touches on the famed topic of finding ones' song.
So amazing, spectacular, wonderful, euphoric, and unfortunately thats the limit of my vocabulary hahahahah, but i think you get the idea. Damn! If only this site had a place to put favourites, i would have tried to put this up more than once!
Although your song may be sad, it is beautiful!
Posted: Jan 4, 2008
That is a real poem, don't put down that pen darling. Cos one day you'll regret it. If yr this good when yr 17 you'll be unstoppable when yr older. Check out my site, only one poem at the moment but that will change.
Posted: Mar 1, 2008
... A symphony... of blood... My heart races with the exileration of ecstasy. Such thoughts as I have had... have never been voiced. Such sweet melodies of my mind, never expressed. Wether it be inspiration that courses through my veins, or something feircer... I do not know. Such music my heart has longed for, and now recieved... such... unmitigated beauty. I know not words powerful enough to express what this poem has made me feel... Thank you.
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
this was awesome! i really liked :"the song unsung is killing me"
favorite line
Posted: May 12, 2008
beautiful yet so sad...
your poetry always speaks of you being torn...i wonder if one day you will simply split?
Posted: Oct 18, 2008
AWH!! LOVELY!!!!XD
Posted: Nov 4, 2008
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