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Bleeding Melody

Poem By: PaintersPen
Poetry


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Submitted: Dec 6, 2007    Reads: 81    Comments: 10    Likes: 6   


There is a music in me
A brutal melody
A broken symphony
A resonance that sings through me
 
The cords are dull and hurting
The notes are sharp and lilting
Strumming the strings of this melody,
Is a musician of my own intensity
 
Her fingers are taunt and bleeding
Eyes half closed, pain escalating
She lifts the strains of this cacophony
Into a bleeding melody
 
This is the music in me
Orchestrated in my vulnerability
This music that bleeds in me,
Strums my discordant insecurity
 
This song unsung is killing me
The words to it are a forgotten entity
So lost in this musical uncertainty
 
Bleeding from the melody
The only tourniquet left to me
…a new harmony
 


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Lovely! :-) ~ K

Posted: Dec 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

Wow!
Amazing!
I absolutely love it!!!

Posted: Dec 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much :)

Yes it is an Awesome write. I would have used 'WOW' and Amazing! but Tess already did Lol. no but really it is very, very good!

Posted: Dec 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it

cool. well done. great read. really like it.

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks so much

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Ahhh!! You made me have a hysterical fan screaming moment!!
Truly one of your best pieces. Beautiful words, so haunting and truthful. It touches on the famed topic of finding ones' song.
So amazing, spectacular, wonderful, euphoric, and unfortunately thats the limit of my vocabulary hahahahah, but i think you get the idea. Damn! If only this site had a place to put favourites, i would have tried to put this up more than once!
Although your song may be sad, it is beautiful!

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Truly thank you from the bottom of my heart your esteemed praise means so much to me.To create something beautiful using words is all I've ever really wanted to do. So thank you again :)

That is a real poem, don't put down that pen darling. Cos one day you'll regret it. If yr this good when yr 17 you'll be unstoppable when yr older. Check out my site, only one poem at the moment but that will change.

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. I certainly dont intend to :)
I'll check it out asap thanks again

... A symphony... of blood... My heart races with the exileration of ecstasy. Such thoughts as I have had... have never been voiced. Such sweet melodies of my mind, never expressed. Wether it be inspiration that courses through my veins, or something feircer... I do not know. Such music my heart has longed for, and now recieved... such... unmitigated beauty. I know not words powerful enough to express what this poem has made me feel... Thank you.

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

No, thank you. Your words are beautiful and you have fulfilled my greatest desire, to make people feel through my writing. So thank you

this was awesome! i really liked :"the song unsung is killing me"

favorite line

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

beautiful yet so sad...
your poetry always speaks of you being torn...i wonder if one day you will simply split?

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

AWH!! LOVELY!!!!XD

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :)



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