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Submitted: Mar 18, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
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Painters Pen, that was mezmerizingly gorgeous.
I love crystals and it was beautiful the way you used its qualities to describe a heart and love. I imagined a fragile girl giving her heart to someone.
Very sweet. The last two lines really stood out and finished it off well ^^:
"The mystery of the crystal heart?
Once given you must forever be apart…"
Sorry i havent kept up with you in a while please accept my apology. You are seriously in the top five writers as my favourites here.
It was a wonderful piece.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
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