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Crystal Heart

Poem By: PaintersPen
Poetry


Tags: heart, love, gift, crystal

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Submitted: Mar 18, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Reflective sparkling delight.
Beautiful, mysterious. Just the sight
Sunlit patterns across the wall:
Rainbow light-glow waterfall.
 
Cupped between tentative fingers.
Breathlessness as beauty lingers.
A prize a treasure a reason,
For me to give. A fleeting love season…
 
Fragile and transparent, its depths are hidden.
Obscure, obsolete and forbidden.
Crystal heart must I let you go?
My fragile treasure! My life blood’s flow.
 
A sunlit gift I never wanted to give
Without your flickering light, how can I live?
 
A crystal heart must shatter
But this is not the matter
For the shards sparkle, a different brilliance
A new jewel: the tears cried since
 
The mystery of the crystal heart?
Once given you must forever be apart…


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Lionheart
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Painters Pen, that was mezmerizingly gorgeous.
I love crystals and it was beautiful the way you used its qualities to describe a heart and love. I imagined a fragile girl giving her heart to someone.
Very sweet. The last two lines really stood out and finished it off well ^^:
"The mystery of the crystal heart?
Once given you must forever be apart…"

Sorry i havent kept up with you in a while please accept my apology. You are seriously in the top five writers as my favourites here.
It was a wonderful piece.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. somehow crystal is just the perfect cliche to use for beautiful and fragile things. And the image of a fragile girl giving her heart is exactly what i wanted to portray. Please dont apologise your comments are worth the wait. And it is a great compliment to be amoung your top writers truly it is. Thank you as always



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