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Submitted: Jul 9, 2007 Reads: 84 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
Dawn
Dawn has come,
Slowly lighting the land.
Golden fingers of a golden hand
Stretching along the horizon,
Illuminating all that was dark.
From the tips of grass to the start of tree bark
Lighting upon the mountain top
Filling the sky with its brilliance
Birds take flight, heralding the magnificence.
Dawn has come,
Its time for me to move on
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very nice! and at the end 'dawn has come it's time for me to move on' I wish you the best. it sounds like an awakening. wish I would get up for the sunrise again, seems I've been having the morning lazy's lately. well, I could see it in my minds eye through poem --thanks
Posted: Jul 9, 2007
PaintersPen:
Nice and naturalistic. Most colorful and appealing imagery. Most terrific. Reading this would be a great way for everyone to begin their day.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jul 11, 2007
aw i havent seen the sun rise for ages i love the sun if it wernt for the suns warmth wed all be dead... nice pretty poem btw...:)
Posted: Aug 7, 2008
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