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Failed Destiny

Poem By: PaintersPen
Poetry


If one fails is it true failure? Inspired by a line in a book I'm currently reading Starbook By Ben Okri View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 5, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

Centre stage
Poised and ready
All that was, is to be
Centre stage
And she takes flight
Wondrous, just the sight
 
Stage right
Breathless in exhilaration
All balanced on perfection
Stage right
Her foot but a move misplaced
Perfect precision defaced
 
Stage wing
All that was, will never be
Failure of a destiny
Stage wing
But a wing of failure to be?

Or perhaps an alternate destiny

 


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Satis Shroff
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Wonderful imagery,dear PaintersPen
Through failures we learn,
When the will is there.
This audition was a flop,
Next try she's on the top,
Of her aspirations
Her destiny,
Her dreams.

Posted: Jan 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much.



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