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Frozen Heart

Poem By: PaintersPen
Poetry


Sequel to i miss you View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 23, 2007    Reads: 88    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


 

I thought I would miss you forever

I thought my heart would be frozen in place

Time warped icicle, moments embrace,

Frozen lips of a parted sigh

Frigid emotions never to die

I thought I would miss you forever

 

I thought time would never heal

I thought the arctic palace of my heart

Would never again feel what I feel

I thought I would never awake from this frozen slumber

Iciness encased, forever this chill,

Of a frosty memory of what we were

I thought time could never heal

 

I thought I would miss you forever

Until a heated kiss from another

Smouldering lips to frosty ice

Melting the memory

 

I do not love him I never will

But his kiss has melted this frosty chill

For I do not love you I never have

And from all those frozen moments of us two

I know I no longer miss you


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Comments:

4/5, i really liked this one, although i haven't experience such a thing but i can definately understand what you are feeling here.

Posted: Jul 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks so much :)

This poem clears up all the confusion. Very well done. I have experianced this accept I never found another person to be with. I enjoyed reading this poem very much.

Posted: Jul 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Glad it cleared it up:) Thank you so much and hope one day you find someone

hmmm....A very pretty piece!!!
A great read!!^^

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the comment



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