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Letters Unsent

Poem By: PaintersPen
Poetry


Tags: letters, usent

Unsaid unsent, just written View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 14, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Pages and pages
Just lines and words
One after another
Soluble ink begins to merge
 
Simple thoughts, simple feeling
Spattering each insignificant page
How is it I can breathe this worthless dreaming?
Paper bars and an inky cage
 
No address, no destination
Just lines and words
The ocean on a single sheath
The black inky swell and surge
 
They are all addressed to you
My alphabet of love and what I resent
The ones the delivered mean nothing
The others are just letters unsent


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That pile of letters unsent - ??????????

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Sitting quietly in a pile until i find the strenght to read them or even send them :)

Hi, I really like this one. It felt as if i was writing it myself to someone.

It's like you have put my thoughts into words. :-)

Great job!
Keep writing!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!:)



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