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Lost in Confusion

Poem By: Paws
Poetry


Lost in my own emotions with nothing but answerless questions and cunfusion... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 12, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Lost
 
Lost in a sea of confusion and pain
Needing only to be found
Before I go utterly insane
 
These emotions running wildly through me
Prevent my senses from being clear
To what may be right in front to see.
 
I flail around and wildly swing
Hoping that some kind of answer
Will present itself upon my wing.
 
These sweet answers give me flight
So I can soar up high above the trees
Away from my problems and into the night.
 
But these answers never come.
The questions remaining torturous
Weighing on my mind with a hefty sum.
 
And so I remain lost,
In the swirling sea of my mind
Questions and wishing having a high cost.
 
I know you wish to find me
But that can never be.
 
For if I can’t even find myself,
How are you to find me?


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Comments:

Hei..I like this one^_^
Loved the ending!XD

good job..keep writing!
And take care^_^

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Really appreciate the comments. :)



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